The zoo trip
One bright sunny morning I marched
down the long road that my house was on.
I saw some giant and small houses and some
tree houses and butterflies on beautiful plants.
I was finally there and extremely puffed I
listened to my teacher I was ready to go
(1 hour later) we were there wow!!!!!!!
I said to myself, I saw a glass IT
LOOKED JUST LIKE A GLASS OF
WATER.I went to drink it and it was
disgusting then I noticed it was cow
pee yuck yuck yuck. Then I saw all of
the animals.
tree houses and butterflies on beautiful plants.
I was finally there and extremely puffed I
listened to my teacher I was ready to go
(1 hour later) we were there wow!!!!!!!
I said to myself, I saw a glass IT
LOOKED JUST LIKE A GLASS OF
WATER.I went to drink it and it was
disgusting then I noticed it was cow
pee yuck yuck yuck. Then I saw all of
the animals.
Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI was marching right along with the narrator--enjoying the beautiful day when EWWWW I had the same reaction upon realizing it was COW PEE in the glass that looked like water. Keep writing. Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA