once upon a time there was a fantail
fluttering through the cold winter breeze
trying to find some place that was warm and
cosy.The fantails name was Rose.
Rose was lost.Rose found a tree Rose
started pecking on it.It was hollo Rose
flew around to the other side there was a
little hole.Rose went in. There was a
woodpecker bird.There was a table with a
glass on top.what was in the glass.It looked
just like a glass of water. Soon the
woodpecker bird spotted Rose.They
played a game. Now they were friends.
fluttering through the cold winter breeze
trying to find some place that was warm and
cosy.The fantails name was Rose.
Rose was lost.Rose found a tree Rose
started pecking on it.It was hollo Rose
flew around to the other side there was a
little hole.Rose went in. There was a
woodpecker bird.There was a table with a
glass on top.what was in the glass.It looked
just like a glass of water. Soon the
woodpecker bird spotted Rose.They
played a game. Now they were friends.
A great descriptive beginning to your story! I'm glad Rose found a warm, cosy place. I'm wondering... what was in that glass that looked like water?
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